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Jun and Dusty: Jun's backstory~Note~Jun is the narrator, just to let you know.~~~~~"Wow! Its huge!" I cried, looking up at Mt. Coronet. I recently was traveling Sinnoh, looking for grass type pokémon to train. and my search led from my home of Solaceon Town to this gigantic mountain. So I went in the small opening, and into the depths of the rock. "Hmm, I wonder what pokémon live here?" I muttered under my breath, whilst eating some cookies I made earlier. But then, I heard a loud "VEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!" and it sounded like a pokémon was in pain. So I dropped my cookies and dashed over to the spot. Then I saw what was causing the ruckus. A bunch of hitmonlee were ganging up on a grey Eevee, and the Eevee looked terrified."Hey! Leave that eevee ALONE!" I shrieked to get their attention off the eevee. One of the hitmonlee glared at me, his eyes pretty much telling me, 'Back off, brat.'Without question, I knew I had to fight then to get them to listen. "Go, Everyone!!" I cried, a